We had no takers on my challenge last week to critique the design candidates for the 2014 American Platinum Eagle. So here are my thoughts.
-Editor
1 - I like this one. I like how it shows movement and embodies the concept of freedom as a freed bird. It's uncluttered and I also like how the
figures break the circle of the rim. The design pops out, although I would
worry that such an unbalanced design would strike up well.
4 - I'm indifferent to this one. It's nicely rendered, but embodies the "Blessings" more than "Liberty" - design 1 does that much better. I'd have to agree that the bounty is too bountiful.
5,6 - Number 5 is much better than 6; the group of figures stops the eye and frames the scene. The foot is just plain wrong. But as a design concept
it's not bad, and a good engraver could execute it well.
7 - I'm indifferent to this one, too.
8 - I like the main figure a lot (it wowed me), but it seems too isolated. There's nothing to indicate where she is, where she might be
going, or what she might be looking at. I like uncluttered designs, but
this may be too uncluttered.
11 - I was impressed with this one. I like the concept of the child and the
torch, which to me evokes a young Statue of Liberty. Her expression is
hopeful and apprehensive at the same time, which is very appropriate for the difficult journey of Liberty.
I think that the landscape is lame - too plain
and formulaic. But I like the concept a lot and would say it's my
favorite. But I don't think a good engraver could rescue the landscape -
it needs a better design.
If I had to rank these, I would pick 11, 1, 8,7, 5,4, 6.
As it turns out, the Citizens Coinage Advisory Committee (CCAC) liked #11 too.
To read the CCAC's comments, See:
CCAC Review of 2014 American Platinum Eagle Designs
(news.coinupdate.com/ccac-review-of-american-platinum-eagle-designs-3043/)
To read the earlier E-Sylum article, see:
2014 AMERICAN PLATINUM EAGLE DESIGNS
(www.coinbooks.org/esylum_v16n50a11.html)
Wayne Homren, Editor
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